Sunday, February 12, 2006

11 AM poem:

I've never cared so much about the country
bloody, but dried
a taste of childish summers like sunburnt shoulders
or tired lungs from too much seaside
shaking and sore, this dry winter air
creeps in through ancient windows, castle walls
stone and mortar not built to last
leaves a cracked path
a bottom lip cut like a diamond
shiny, flat faces, all eyes staring in one direction
lying eyes, and a mouth that's not so obvious
parted, ready for words
thoughts for flying in every direction
shaking library shelves
gold-plated faces on novel covers nod their heads, agreeing
that laurel-leafed head, his lips won't move
keeps cold when I try to warm them from moldy lectures
kisses like a corpse

Tuesday, February 07, 2006

Let's get this out of the way & skeletons and buildings

First thing's first: Yes, I do have a livejournal, I also keep tabs on my myspace blog, and I did once have a xanga page. So, this new blog may seem a bit excessive, but I will back it up:
My livejournal is pretty personal and, at times, embarassing.
My myspace blog is silly and just for fun.
Xanga is dead.

I intend to use this page for actual work and serious writing. Does this sound good? I write a lot of poems and I am currently working on a play about letter-writing and sister relationships. I will post sections of the play as I write.

Last night I read a poem in front of a fairly large audience for a Make Poverty History charity event. I think it went over pretty well. The poem was an older piece, but I had never read it aloud before. It worked out, but I'm still trying to figure out the kinks in the poem, it looks like it has problems. Or, maybe I should just leave it as it stands. It's from an earlier period so there shouldn't be a need to rework it. It's a documentation of where I was stylistically at that point.
Here's the poem:

as if piece by piece it built up, the foundation already laid and a brick added every day.
must have kept my head turned for a bit, busy with other worries, unnoticed how great the structure changed.
it was a skeleton of a thing (really before- a complete building, then fire, then dismantlement, demolition and reestablishment until it became) a skeleton of a thing with tightly bound beams and bolts, little else.
So bare bones, daylight straight through.
I'd walk past and catch a glimpse of the site everywhere I went.
hard and steely. A work in progress, written off, but complete and completely beautiful
smooth surfaces reflected the sun's beams, shining shone splendour.
but buildings must be built, strong and sturdy
and I lost my track
so soon it was whole.
and I know there's a skeleton living inside
vitality reconfirmed so I light a match.